How come you've gotten so few comments so far? This story deserves more love, it's absolutely effin' stunning. There are so many things that could've gone wrong, given the premise, but it's pefection, all of it.
I love all the details about ballet in the first part, the technical aspects of it makes it so more real; I loved how Meg brought more insight into Matt's character; I love how you're getting teenagers absolutely right and I think it's amazing how you can tell, from only two chapters so far, how Matt is definitely a teenager yes, with all the drama anad angst of a typical one, but how more mature and an "old soul" (can't find a better expression for it), an artist, he is at the same time.
Oh and btw, I love Dom too lol, and the contrast he provides. The ending was just wheee haha
Amist that all, I can't believe English isn't your first language. It's not just that you manage to choose the right words to convey a certain feeling or mood everytime, but it's also the beautiful style, that also fits the type of story so well.
I can't gush enough, this is just brilliant. Happy New year and may we have more of this story (#SOON) and more stories like this <3
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I love all the details about ballet in the first part, the technical aspects of it makes it so more real; I loved how Meg brought more insight into Matt's character; I love how you're getting teenagers absolutely right and I think it's amazing how you can tell, from only two chapters so far, how Matt is definitely a teenager yes, with all the drama anad angst of a typical one, but how more mature and an "old soul" (can't find a better expression for it), an artist, he is at the same time.
Oh and btw, I love Dom too lol, and the contrast he provides. The ending was just wheee haha
Amist that all, I can't believe English isn't your first language. It's not just that you manage to choose the right words to convey a certain feeling or mood everytime, but it's also the beautiful style, that also fits the type of story so well.
I can't gush enough, this is just brilliant. Happy New year and may we have more of this story (#SOON) and more stories like this <3